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I need you baby like a daisy needs the sun
     like a soldier needs his gun
     like a cheetah needs a run

And I need you baby like an earthquake needs to shake
     like a birthday needs a cake
     like a pontoon needs a lake

And I need you baby like an addict needs his fix
     like an athlete needs his kicks
     like the rabbit needs his trix

And I need you baby like an eagle needs to fly
     like a possum needs to die
     like an airplane needs it's high

And I need you baby like a website needs its hit
     like a smoker needs a quit
     like a fat man needs a sit

And I need you baby like an island needs some shade
     like a broker needs to trade
     like a rich man needs his maid

And I need you baby like an Irish needs a drink
     like evolution needs a link
     like a diva needs her pink

And I need you baby like the new kid needs a friend
     like a fashion needs to trend
     like a poem needs an end
For my lovely wife, whom i needless to say -need.
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4defyinggravity Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Cute, I like how you ended it
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Jft15 Nov 2, 2012  Student Filmographer
Aww
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MelodieRox Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:giggle: This is funny. And sweet. Well done. :clap:
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westernfusion Nov 2, 2012  Student
This is a really well written poem! The similes really make you think, about society and stuff. But they also show how much you must care for your wife xD
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:iconeggsmash:
thank you kindly!
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annabelleemydarling Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Best poem I've seen on here!! She better love this haha
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:iconeggsmash:
you're too kind!
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Everlasting90 Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome job! I hope your wife love(s)d it!
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